November 19

100 Word Challenge

As me and my sister Bianca were walking home from school, we came across a really pretty, funny looking card on the path. Our mother always told us not to pick up dirty things from the ground; but this time, we couldn’t resist. It read in bold letters, that we were able to receive one tonne of sweet, delicious candy! And all we had to do was write our names on the raffle ticket, and it would be announced in the next hour. I don’t know if your parents let you have candy, but mine don’t, so we were extremely excited. All we had to do now was put it in the mailbox, which was luckily just a block away. We ran home so we would arrive just at the right time. We got home, quickly grabbing the key from under the gnome. We flicked the TV on as they were just about to announce the winners. ‘Bianca and Alya Blackwill! Congratulations!’ We flicked the TV off and celebrated, but as time went by, we kept asking ourselves; ‘Where would we hide it all?’.

I’m sorry this 100wc is a little bit longer then usual

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November 7

100wc Flame, swimming, celebrated, white, tomorrow

The swimming contest is finally here, and i’m so excited. We line up at the diving boards, ready to start. ‘3, 2, 1!’ And i dive into the water. Through my fogged goggles, I can see Ryan Boulder kicking off the wall – which is classified as ‘cheating’. I come out of the water, and see Ryan in first place. I’m furious with flame as I see Ryan’s family cheering and celebrating. I take off my goggles as I accept i’m in second place. I walk home, white in disappointment, and I don’t even take my trophy. Tomorrow, i’m going to convince my mum that i’m sick, so that I don’t have to show my shame at school.

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October 22

100 Word Challenge

Cassidy Mubble caused  some awful trouble, to Mr log who was just walking his dog. she went to the lake and pushed him away and  took his old dog cuddle. Mr log was quite in shock but he was also in fury. he jumped out the water  ready to slaughter that young girl who took his old cuddle. Cassidy Mubble was in a little jumble when there was no way to go. Mr log took his old dog and said ”i’m going to call your mother”

September 18

btn on electricity

the world is separated into 2 different substances insulators and conductors. insulators hold electrons tightly where as conductors hold their electrons loosely. glass, ceramic objects and silk are just some of the materials that insulate electricity.

i understand that their are 2 different types of electricity current and static and that there are 2 different substances insulators and conductors.

i didn’t really understand how the machine worked so i guess that my question is how exactly did the machine work.

August 20

100wc The acrobatics seals.

Yesterday I went to the annual seal circus. My family and arrived so early that we got to sit in the best spot-the front row. There were so many entertaining stunts. My favourite was by far, the acrobatic seals.They were doing all this cool stuff, and the best bit was when one of them accidentally fell into the water. Everybody started laughing, even the seal’s partner. look mum took a photo:

when  we got home my mum posted the photo on seal-book and guess what. the next morning my mums photo was on the news and she was being interviewed about the extraordinary picture.

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August 20

my forever home by gali

Physical

the only real physical side of Sammie is that it is a scruffy thing. i know this from this sentence:

I guess they didn’t want a scruffy thing like me messing up their uppity seaside neighborhood.

from this sentence i inferred that Sammie was a stray cat and hadn’t bathed in a very long time.

Intellectual

i personally think that this cat is pretty smart.it knows the way that humans around the area it lives are like and makes sure it only goes to the places at night to get the food. it knows if it were to go during the day it would get shooed away.

Emotional

i believe that Sammie has an optimistic soul and loves playing around. i think that he is like a normal cat he likes cuddling and snuggling. but unlike other cats he is very grateful that he has a family to take care of him.

Social

i think that Sammie is a very kind and playful cat because he likes when the family comes and takes care of him but he also likes his privacy because he said he liked being alone in his new home.

Philosophical

i think thatv Sammie sees that life is harsh but no matter what you will always have a happy ending.

 

August 12

100 word challenge

Prompt: Cushion Scarlet Annoying Watered Violin

“AHHHHHH” yelled scarlet as her annoying brother exited her bedroom. She threw her cushion at him just as he slammed the door. She sat angrily on her bed as she looked out her watered window to the murky sky as it had just stopped raining. In one of the raindrops she saw a reflection of her violin that was in the corner of her room. She stood and went to grab it as she knew the only thing that would be able to calm her down would be her violin.

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August 12

Charles Reflection

Fact #1 Fiction is All about the character

The main character in this story is Laurie. Laurie abandoned the proper uniform for his school which are overalls and instead wore his scraggy pants and a baseball cap. I think this shows that Laurie is quite misbehaved and doesn’t listen to the rules. He also made up a person that apparently went to his class and said everything that he, himself did was Laurie and his mother only found this out in parent teacher interviews.

Fact #2 Fiction is all about what your character wants

I think that Laurie wants to feel good about himself so makes up Charles so that he can say all the things that he did wrong was Charles. I think that Laurie doesn’t want to fess up to his parents so he makes Charles up to tell his parents what he is wrong but in another way.

Fact #3 Fiction is all about how your character gets or does not get what he wants

I think that Laurie does get what he wants but also doesn’t. he gets what he wants because his parents believe that Charles is doing all those things wrong and they never really question it. he gets what he wants because he feels good about himself. but he also doesn’t get what he wants because when his mother goes to the parent teacher interview she finds out that Charles was actually Laurie.

Fact #4 Fiction is all about how your character changes

There isn’t actually much change in this story because it ends with Laurie’s mother finding out that Charles isn’t real. So we don’t actually know if Laurie repents or if he gets away with it but there is a change in the story like when Laurie comes home saying that Charles became the teacher’s helper. That shows that Laurie changed his behaviour at school.

Fact #5 Fiction is all about the world the author creates

I think that the author made a really relatable world. I think that she made a world where kids Cn relate because its school and home. I feel that these are the 2 places that children spend most of their time at. I think that that’s why the author chose home and school as the setting or “world” to make it moe relatable for children.

This is a world where people can relate. Anyone from anywhere can come here and find that it is just like theirs.

August 6

Steamed Windows Theme Homework

I think 1 of the themes in this story is loss. I felt loss in this story when Alexia said that she loved music but couldn’t hear it anymore.

I think the author is trying to tell us that there are deaf people all around us and all around the world and we should learn to respect them and know that it can happen to you when ever. I saw an example of this when  Alexia and her mother were using the whiteboard as a way to communicate.

I think that people who might connect to this story are people who have been deaf since they were born or tragically lost there hearing some time in their life. i have a connection to this because i watched a video on this boy who was deaf and he had to use sign language to communicate to his friends and family

A part in the story that is figurative is when Alexia is talking about how she can sometimes hear music but its in a sound proof box and she is out side the box.

This is the exact sentence:

It’s the only thing, if I really, really listen I can sometimes hear it, but it’s quiet, muted. It’s like its playing, softly inside a sound proof room and I’m outside the door, sitting and straining to hear. 

When she says its like shes showing that it is an example and that its not the complete truth.

She shows that she wants to hear music again but can’t.

A repeating pattern in this story is that she is always saying she’s deaf and that her whole life has changed because she can’t listen to music. I think it shows that she used to express her self through music but now that she can’t listen to music anymore so she is lost and it shows that she showed her thoughts and opinions through music but no longer can because she can’t listen to music.

I think that what the author is trying to convey is that we should not take anything for granted because we could have our whole life perfect one minute and the next minute we could have it all gone. The author shows this when she said that Alexia woke up from amnesia and felt quite stressed that she could see people talking but she could not hear them. I felt this showed that we should not take our senses for granted and that we should feel very privileged of having our senses.

August 6

100wc but then the flash me

my family and i been living in this lighthouse for about a month or so and last night i just had my first encounter with lightning. surprisingly i was sleeping very peacefully on a stormy night but then the flash of lightning made me wake up instantaneously. i gasped in shock. i sat up as the sound of thunder rang through my ears. i got out of my bed and ran to my door. it creaked as it flew open. i ran up stairs to my sisters room i opened the door and not to my surprise she was also awake waiting for me to come.

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