April 19

100 Word Challenge

It was a dark and gloomy night and my brother and I couldn’t sleep. Of course the adventuring type of kids we were we went to the basement which was the only room we weren’t aloud to go in . we walked down the stairs our hearts beating fast hoping that we wouldn’t dye. we got down there and there was nothing to see. we were just about to walk up the stairs when my brother noticed a wall moving. we went in and found ourselves in a place like Narnia. we were so scared we ran upstairs and let me tell you we never went to the basement again.

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Posted April 19, 2017 by tiana2014 in category 100wc

1 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge

  1. libby2016

    You set the scene beautifully at the start of this piece. We could feel the fear and apprehension as you ventured downstairs. The ending felt very rushed. It is difficult when you have big ideas and a limited number of words to record them in.

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